try this

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Originally posted by jsrobinson Edit: Not sure how to embed the soundcloud widget

Try this SoundCloud

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Originally posted by jsrobinson - What sucks?

well you sound negative about this track already...
it's an achievement in putting a track together on any level man

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Originally posted by jsrobinson - What doesn't suck?

realy liking that acid sound

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Originally posted by jsrobinson - What might I focus on as first priority?

the kick. The drum kick is what drives most forms of electronic/dance music

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Originally posted by jsrobinson - What might I focus on as secondary priorities?

would have said the melody but for you getting the that bassline talking with the kick..
try just listening to them together? for me I would like them gelling more

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Originally posted by jsrobinson - Worth finishing as a whole from first impressions?

for sure man but add some progression and changes to keep the listener listening

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Thanks. Trying to learn to be less hard on myself Learning to trust oneself can be difficult.

What would you say regarding the kick that could use improvement?

Also not quite sure how to go about getting the bass talking so much with the other elements? Could you speak more on this? Any input would be awesome. Thanks much.

Thanks for the tip on checking out the kick and bass solo. I'll give that a go.

Last edited by on Apr-21-2012 at 02:22