Not a lot going on here. The sound selection I do not like very much. Sounds dated. The clap is a bit hollow. The kick doesn't really come through the mix the way it should. Percussion is very subdued and non-engaging. Though, it seems like you're going in the right direction? How long have you been working on music?

ya, i agree overall with your assessment of the track. judging from the download/play ratio however it seems some people enjoyed it.

i started out with magix music maker in 2009 and have been using professional equipment for about 2 years now.