Its certainly got all the elements in there for the back bone of the tune.

I would say its a bit thin in terms of fx and texture in the break. at some in to give it some depth

If you can with trance, try and add a new sound in every 8 - 16 bars as well. something subtle.

but on the whole its a pretty good. just needs a bit of touching up imo

Thanks its a good point you give. I totally agree with the 'thin' break. I know I still have to work on that to get more depth.

Create multiples of the lead sound so you have 3 channels. pan one left and one right and leave one in the centre. that helps.

also use some stereo enhancement on the pads or surround.

Depending on what prog ur using to make your stuff.