Mix wise this is fairly good.
Content wise, not really my thang, but that's personal.
Maybe on your next get your percs more groovy as they sound a bit basic. Happy to walk you through it if you want by getting you to do drums one part at a time.
yea dude that sounds terrific and thanks for listening to my track. I'm kind of proud about this one.
Jun-21-2012 02:07
Trancelover03591
Trained tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2011
Location: Southern California
First off, I think this is your best production. There is a song in here (it hasn't been arranged right though) that is relatively current and club friendly. Though, I wonder if the lead is a loop from a pack...
Your mixing is actually pretty good. However, what your are mixing isn't right. Many of the synths sound dated and cheesy. I think the lead is closest to being right. The highest synth that loops over and over is unbearable though and sounds like it is from 1993. The snare playing through out is kind of Detroit techno'y which dates the song and gets old. The kick doesn't have enough sub. The song isn't big and strong enough either and is loopy.
To that end, I know you like Arty and I do too. Listen to his tracks and face them honestly as a measure of how far there is to go. His intros alone have more complexity than your climaxes and you have to match that level of energy if you want to improve.
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