No feedback? Anyone?

You need to take the trouble of putting a proper play platform on here, no one can be 'rsed to clink a link. I actually did click it but I saw a really horny photo lower down so I ended up playing that track, sorry mate.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler You need to take the trouble of putting a proper play platform on here, no one can be 'rsed to clink a link. I actually did click it but I saw a really horny photo lower down so I ended up playing that track, sorry mate.

Typing this took you longer then just clicking on the youtube link.

As far as the track goes, melodic-wise it is to simple and predictable for me, the bass progression @2.06 sounds a bit cheesy. Also the clap is not working for me, but that might be personal taste. But all in all it's a decent track, especially the composition works good.

Just remember, practice makes perfect, so just keep doing your thing.

yikes, clap sample is definitely out of place. still, not a bad track in the slightest. definitely predictable but i think thats how this deggadegga stuff goes most of the time.

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quite a nice track. sounds are nice and moves along quite well. good perc to give it that bounce as well.

nice work.

hey guys, thanks so much for the feedback. We will take all the feedback in and try to improve.

Much appreciated.

D&V

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I actually did click it but I saw a really horny photo lower down so I ended up playing that track, sorry mate.

rofl.

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Originally posted by Deillon Typing this took you longer then just clicking on the youtube link.

I would agree if this was the only time but lots of artists don't embed in this subforum and if nothing else it lowers a chance for feedback for them; never-mind it is more complicated for the listener.

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There isn't anything special about the track. I can't find anything in particular that is the problem but lots of small things add up to a track that doesn't have that professional sound. This says you just need more time to perfect. The drums (and this is true for almost every uplifting trance track on this subforum) are weak and aged sounding. The overall track fits in 2005 and would be hard for any non-uplifting DJ to incorporate into a set. Modernize.

Keep it up. It isn't bad but I think any A&R of any important trance label (which there are only a few) would pass on it.

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greetings azzies, cool some more Australian trance producers

nice track, wich part of OZ are you all?

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Originally posted by Peter Campbell greetings azzies, cool some more Australian trance producers nice track, wich part of OZ are you all?

Hi Peter,

Thanks for the message!

We are from Sydney, Australia. Yourself?

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There isn't anything special about the track. I can't find anything in particular that is the problem but lots of small things add up to a track that doesn't have that professional sound. This says you just need more time to perfect. The drums (and this is true for almost every uplifting trance track on this subforum) are weak and aged sounding. The overall track fits in 2005 and would be hard for any non-uplifting DJ to incorporate into a set. Modernize. Keep it up. It isn't bad but I think any A&R of any important trance label (which there are only a few) would pass on it.

Thanks for this honest feedback. We will of course keep trying..

Cheers

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Originally posted by doyle&varas Hi Peter, Thanks for the message! We are from Sydney, Australia. Yourself?

way up north man, small place behined Cairns up in the mountains called Atherton

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