Hi everyone, I've just started making music again and this is my first new track: http://laxmi.bandcamp.com/

Please let me know what you all think. I'm really new to this so I hope you can go easy on me.

One friend told me that I should bring up the kick and bass a lot, but when I did that it seemed too loud when I played it from my laptop, so I'm not sure what to do.

Note: Some of you may not consider this Trance at all, and if so, I apologize. I just composed it according to what I felt musically. And it's not really important, but I'm from Singapore.

Last edited by LAXMI on Sep-20-2012 at 12:53