around 5.30mins your accapella starts to drift off, about 6mins it's just plain embarrassing, don't you hear that?
and the highs are a bit harsch. could be a nice track, but execution can do better

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At the risk of boring people to death with the same track, just thought i'd post up my entry for the same competition.

I haven't entered many Remix competitions but thoroughly enjoy listening to how everyone interprets the style, genre and feel of an EDM tune...this track is no exception. You don't get much to work on (Vocal only!!) but have already heard some nice entries to this particular competition. All feed back is very welcome and gratefully received..hope you enjoy the track.

Jeremy Vancaulart feat. Nickie Minshall "Stay With Me" (RobbieSH Remix)

That bass synth is pretty fat once u get it full cutoff - although idk how well it fits with that kick - and yeah raph is on point - i just think some of the lows/mids o nthe vocal could get cut and it would sit way better - thats a big thing I think alot of people overlook with vocals - cutting them eq wise is an art and takes some time/experience to get it right. but yeah interesting track - I think the arrangement is decent, maybe some more fx sweep work to tie parts together better? great first take bro.

i personally enjoyed it !



Pretty nice !

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