Registered: Nov 2003
Location: Ninjas never tell....
Not bad at all, I think the pad can be a bit stronger perhaps more body. The kick can use less reverb. The bass sound around 1:28 or so gets a bit louder which then it becomes a bit abrasive. The sound at the 3:50 mark is loud and distorting, i'd put right before the kick comes in to assist the build up after toning it down a bit. The arp comes in again at 4:46, which it seems louder than before, and somewhat becomes formulatic.
Overall not bad, some elements could use a bit of placement in the mix.
Registered: Jun 2008
Location: Lelystad, Netherlands
Very nice! Would like the vocal just a little bit louder and with a little bit more long tail verb, to make it a bit more floaty. Not much else to moan really. Good Job!
Nov-19-2012 08:22
Juan Paulino
Come Away O Human Child
Registered: Mar 2012
Location: Rouge City
quote:
Originally posted by Raphie
Very nice! Would like the vocal just a little bit louder and with a little bit more long tail verb, to make it a bit more floaty. Not much else to moan really. Good Job!
For me the arpegiated melody is far to prominent and drowns out the vocal.
I would say that the sub bass needs work, really not feeling that rumble at all, there is no dancability to this track i.e. no funk.
Pad needs to be brought forward, in fact I think the breakdown needs to be a bit bigger as it's really only a pause in the music rather than there being a proper drop.
There are some good points too, you have a nice crisp production technique, but just work on making the levels fit in better.
For me the arpegiated melody is far to prominent and drowns out the vocal.
I would say that the sub bass needs work, really not feeling that rumble at all, there is no dancability to this track i.e. no funk.
Pad needs to be brought forward, in fact I think the breakdown needs to be a bit bigger as it's really only a pause in the music rather than there being a proper drop.
There are some good points too, you have a nice crisp production technique, but just work on making the levels fit in better.
Cheers
Nem
Thanks for your comments Nem, for the drop i should of taken out the bass for it to be more proper. I rushed this remix without focusing on my mixing thats why the vocal sounds drowned out. Again thanks man.