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oh no shit that's you, I really liked this track, maybe just the name

if I had one suggestion it'd be don't sidechain the vocal sample

Last edited by meriter on Dec-01-2012 at 16:31

I like it. Nice LA vibe.

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Originally posted by meriter oh no shit that's you, I really liked this track, maybe just the name if I had one suggest it'd be don't sidechain the vocal sample

Thanks, and yea I personally really love that sidechainy vocal sound

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Originally posted by Evolve140 I like it. Nice LA vibe.

Haha, yep. Think I got the bass to a better level?

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I was going to show a bunch of my friends then you took it down?

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Originally posted by Evolve140 I was going to show a bunch of my friends then you took it down?

That was the old link, the newer one should be up there now?

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Just post the new link again. I'm faded

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Originally posted by Evolve140 Just post the new link again. I'm faded

edit: I got it.

Yeah, man, in certain parts put some big delay on those vocals, maybe let them dominate the top for a bit...maybe not dominate but play around with them. They sound great. would totally work.

One more edit.....: Massive tune. Huge big city club vibe. Sexy and groovable. WIN.

Last edited by Evolve140 on Dec-01-2012 at 08:25

Nice tune.

It has a nice groove, but I would say that it's still missing that one memorable thing that would make this massive. It's missing a main hook or theme that would just take this from filler to dance floor weapon.

I don't think the name matches the feel of the track and may be a big turn off for many.

Is this your own composition or are there construction kits in use here? The reason I ask is actually that the instrumentation is very good, and possibly a little bit more evolved than I'm used to here.

It's good, but could be great.

Thanks for sharing though.

Cheers
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Originally posted by Nemesis44 Nice tune. It has a nice groove, but I would say that it's still missing that one memorable thing that would make this massive. It's missing a main hook or theme that would just take this from filler to dance floor weapon. I don't think the name matches the feel of the track and may be a big turn off for many. Is this your own composition or are there construction kits in use here? The reason I ask is actually that the instrumentation is very good, and possibly a little bit more evolved than I'm used to here. It's good, but could be great. Thanks for sharing though. Cheers Nem

Thanks for the critique

I agree with the hook, thinking of adding some vocals in there once I can find a vocalist

You're right about the name, I'll save it for a differnet track hhehe

And yea this is all my own composition. After a while composition just come easy idk..

Great critique thank you

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