Hello folks. Im new to this forum and have only been crackin at Electro/dance/dubstep for a few years now. My newest track i feel is the best quality thing i've done yet but i still feel it needs some criticism to really get some solid shit out.

Let me know what you like or dont like please!
Also i love hearing new music myself so if youve got a similar style feel free to post below, ill check it out for sure.

Live for music!

anything? good? bad? like it? it sucks? your similar song?

is it because no one is a fan of marina and the diamonds?

NV - Dinosaurous Sex (Original Mix)
http://soundcloud.com/nate-vandeuse...ex-original-mix


Newest brostep style mix. Similar feel to the Primadonna song above if you liked it!

check this new remix. tell me 1:42 isnt dirty

The voting for this remix contest on beatport started today! If you have a beatport or like this mix and would like to make an account i would love you forever if you voted for me

Link:
SEVEN LIONS - DAYS TO COME (THE NV REMIX)
Enjoy

Hi Nate,

Musically your compositions are not bad.

The one thing that sticks out for me though is that your sound doesn't seem to merge well enough with the samples you are using from the original tracks. I would spend more time on trying to get that combination sound as if they were meant to be together rather than two separate tracks playing at the same time.

Creatively you have good ideas but I would seek to refine them a little further.

It used to be that if you give feedback to others on this forum it would come back to you and that would have been my advice to you but I have noticed that this forum is mostly full of peeps who just want to promote and expect everyone to bow down and worship them. I'm not sure how much you listen to others but if you comment on other tracks people tend to listen to yours more.

Cheers
Nem

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Originally posted by Nemesis44 Hi Nate, Musically your compositions are not bad. The one thing that sticks out for me though is that your sound doesn't seem to merge well enough with the samples you are using from the original tracks. I would spend more time on trying to get that combination sound as if they were meant to be together rather than two separate tracks playing at the same time. Creatively you have good ideas but I would seek to refine them a little further. It used to be that if you give feedback to others on this forum it would come back to you and that would have been my advice to you but I have noticed that this forum is mostly full of peeps who just want to promote and expect everyone to bow down and worship them. I'm not sure how much you listen to others but if you comment on other tracks people tend to listen to yours more. Cheers Nem

I hear ya, would your be referring to any of the three tracks in particular or all of them have the problem of not combining with the samples too well? I probably could spend more time on refining them more though all together. I try to comment on other peoples music and ask anyone to post there music on my thread because id love to hear others music. Hope it works out. Thanks for your input!!

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Originally posted by Nemesis44 Hi Nate, Musically your compositions are not bad. The one thing that sticks out for me though is that your sound doesn't seem to merge well enough with the samples you are using from the original tracks. I would spend more time on trying to get that combination sound as if they were meant to be together rather than two separate tracks playing at the same time. Creatively you have good ideas but I would seek to refine them a little further. It used to be that if you give feedback to others on this forum it would come back to you and that would have been my advice to you but I have noticed that this forum is mostly full of peeps who just want to promote and expect everyone to bow down and worship them. I'm not sure how much you listen to others but if you comment on other tracks people tend to listen to yours more. Cheers Nem

It is also my final conclusion --> agree with Nem on this + you have massive dynamics loss in your tracks/remixes so far - all this depend on your skills level and equipment you using but good ideas are there already!!!!


Cheers man,

Darek

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 It is also my final conclusion --> agree with Nem on this + you have massive dynamics loss in your tracks/remixes so far - all this depend on your skills level and equipment you using but good ideas are there already!!!! Cheers man, Darek

Finally some constructive criticism! Now when you say "dynamic loss" do you mean like i dont change dynamics enough through out the song orrr ...maybe because of my mixing/mastering the dynamics are lost?
Thanks for the feedback!

It is hard to say but from what I can judge by ear it is blend between your production technique (each individual layer of sound) and your final mixing and mastering stage -> I would look at every sound you are using and balance them in your production so they sound like complementing each other and not like separate or different layer of sound.



Cheer man,

Darek

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very cool symths! Drums and mixing need work though imo!

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