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Hi Rink,
Gave these listen. Will give a few comments.
Titanic - This track seems to lack any real coherent structure, I struggled to get into it as there is no progression, things just seem to happen without any real plan.
WIP is the stronger of the two in all aspects.
Summary:
Both tracks really struggle in terms of balance of sound. You need to focus on getting different musical components to sit right in the mix. Read up on use of compression and how to mix your tracks so that you learn to bring out the right frequencies.
Start writing percussive elements. You tracks are very flat and have no drive because of this.
I look forward to see how your tracks develop in future as you some nice ideas but they are still a little on the raw side at the moment.
Thanks for sharing
Cheers
Nem
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