See my reply on Bass Leaderz - Tranceday
About the buildup of your song and how to embed youtube on your topic.
For youtube just edit-delete on your topic and paste embed code from the tube.
No code needed page can read embed code without need of adding more code
For soundcloud same way i think

About the song.
I really like the melody
But the kick feels wrong imo too much goa feel in the kick
While to song feels more like love and emotion.
So i think a warmer kick will give it a better feel.

And buildup the melody starts too fast
Just repeat the first note of your melody in a rhythm 32 or 64 beats
And then let it play the complete melody.
Easier for dj's to mix then and you can make the song longer as well

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Hey!

Thanks for the advice.
I am currently working on changing the kick drum and adding to the build up.
I'll post back after the weekend with a link to a revised version.
Advice greatly appreciated.

Thanks,
Gareth

Hi.

I have revised the original post with fresh links.

Gareth