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My attempt at doing looney4clooney style criticism/analysis of the track:
First off, the groove is a bit broken. I can't quite describe what it is about it, but it doesn't fit properly and it seems too complicated for something this melody driven (is it house, or is it techno? the track can't decide).
2 minutes in and i feel like it's already lost energy... that bassline is awful and doesn't fit with the rest of the track. That bassline that doesn't fit with the groove plus such a hard mid heavy kick... ouch. Does not fit at all.
The melody has changed to a late stage of a melody... it's a 7 minute track and it feels like the track is about to finish already. Wtf?
3:33 track suddenly became a whole lot harder and very muddy. How energetic is this track supposed to be? It can go for high energy if it wants but if it does; it's gonna need much better execution and flow.
~4:05 what's with the bassline randomly dropping out here? This sounds like a live version of a track done really badly. I'd feel awkward hearing this out anywhere if I wasn't going to see the artist play a live set
4:30 The progression of the supporting melody just doesn't work, it feels artificially extended. You can't whip a 7 minute track out of thin air, if the producer can't make one properly he should stick to shorter tracks until he can.
5:05 The melody that comes in here is reasonable for finishing up the track, but even still... it just feels like it doesn't mesh with the rest of the track and totally changes the mood of the track. I guess maybe that's where you got the idea for it being a finishing track from. I don't think it's strong enough to be a finishing track... it could be if it was more well executed but it isn't.
~6:45 The outro is well executed; the bassline is still poor and doesn't mesh with the rest of the song though which is obvious in this part
| quote: | Originally posted by Looney4Clooney
Poorly mixed with no groove trying to recreate something from another era and failing. I just don't see the point of this track. It uses every cliche , the 909 drums, the m1 piano, the 106 bassline but just sounds like a poor attempt to recreate something without adding anything new and doing it very poorly. |
It feels so hollow that the mood almost becomes dark. This would be a great finisher to a nice hard and long (2 hour plus) industrial techno set because it's just an awkward tune... but I have a feeling that wasn't the intention of the producer somehow.
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