Hello, just finished a dark influenced bass driven trance track flowing at 132bpm, hope to hear some feedback from you guys and if you have something you would like feedback on I'd be more than happy to give my input. Cheers!

Lentej - The City Is Afraid of Me [cut] by Lentej

https://soundcloud.com/lentej/lente...ty-is-afraid-of

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I like this. Nice 303ish bass. Perhaps there's a little too much sidechain going on on the pads? At least in the first part, after the break it fits nicey, sounds like stabs almost. Good work.

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Originally posted by Vernon Wanderer I like this. Nice 303ish bass. Perhaps there's a little too much sidechain going on on the pads? At least in the first part, after the break it fits nicey, sounds like stabs almost. Good work.

Big ups! Believe it or not I made the track on my 15" Macbook Pro using only my Ultrasone DJ1 headphones, once I get home I'll check out the mix on studio monitors and will take your thought into consideration.

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Originally posted by lentej Big ups! Believe it or not I made the track on my 15" Macbook Pro using only my Ultrasone DJ1 headphones, once I get home I'll check out the mix on studio monitors and will take your thought into consideration.

I know how that feels haha, I switch cities bi-weekly and when I'm not home I have only my laptop and some pretty terrible philips phones with me, so I never know if my mix is good or nausea-inducing.

This is pretty well made, and on a second listen I like the track even more. Cheers


Edit: also, fix your soundcloud link in your sig, it leads to: http:///

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A wise prophet hath once foretold:

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Originally posted by stealthman Vernon Wanderer will rediscover his roots back unto wandering vast endless plains miserably....

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Originally posted by Vernon Wanderer I know how that feels haha, I switch cities bi-weekly and when I'm not home I have only my laptop and some pretty terrible philips phones with me, so I never know if my mix is good or nausea-inducing. This is pretty well made, and on a second listen I like the track even more. Cheers Edit: also, fix your soundcloud link in your sig, it leads to: http:///

Same here, but look at the bright side, at least we CAN produce something on shitty laptop haha (thank you technology) Also I find producing in my laptop harder which I feel makes me an even better producer when I get in a studio since I have less to work/worry about.

Appreciate the feedback!

Dafuq.. link fixed!

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