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Sup man,
(listening on AudioTechnica monitoring headphones)
Well for one,
Your track doesn't sound very full, the lack of warmth is mostly to be blamed at the fact that the low end of the frequency spectrum is filled very well.
Either the notes for your bassline are an octave too high, or the VST's you used don't quite get that 'phat' sound you're looking for.
Overall, the melody is surely nice and the slow breakbeat as well.
As for the genre, that's the last thing I would worry about, new genre's pop up every day like daisies 
I like what you got going on here, you just need to improve on the technical side!
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