I tried to remix this track a bit, that didnt get the attention it deserved

here's my vision to it:

download here

righ click save target as

pls give your critics, comments and other feeback about the track
thanks!

john


ohw and the original is located here: http://forums.tranceaddict.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=66903

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Very cool tune man

The arpreggio melody is very nice. Have you tried putting mad reverb on the arp? it's just that I imagine if you did that you might get some Cosmicman sounding stuff

I think it's got a very happy atmoshphere, it's a track that makes you smile when you listen to it

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this is some good ass stuff John, i like it..
BUT, i need to know shit befor any one do anything ok?
as i am "owner" of this melody and 50% "owner" of the original track.

but this is good john, as a said, i like it

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Originally posted by Endre this is some good ass stuff John, i like it.. BUT, i need to know shit befor any one do anything ok? as i am "owner" of this melody and 50% "owner" of the original track. but this is good john, as a said, i like it

Ahh, sorry man, I forgot to tell you that I gave him the permission to remix it... my fault.

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Originally posted by Endre this is some good ass stuff John, i like it.. BUT, i need to know shit befor any one do anything ok? as i am "owner" of this melody and 50% "owner" of the original track. but this is good john, as a said, i like it

whoops, i should have pm-ed you also, sorry! will ask you next time..pls add me to your icq: 35546294, so i can ask you next time if i want to remix something you made

attacc: i will try that reverb thing you said

glad you like it

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JOHN!!!!
Wat moet ik er nu weer van zeggen.. haha het is een heel leuk liedje goed gedaan! ik ben natuurlijk wel een beetje subjectief maar goed
en heb je mijn poster inmiddels al opgehangen

doeixxxxxx Lindsey

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Originally posted by Lindsey JOHN!!!! Wat moet ik er nu weer van zeggen.. haha het is een heel leuk liedje goed gedaan! ik ben natuurlijk wel een beetje subjectief maar goed en heb je mijn poster inmiddels al opgehangen doeixxxxxx Lindsey

hij hangt aan de muur hoor! je moet maar gauw kome kijke hahah
xxx
john

are there any other ppl who want to give some feedback pls?

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Originally posted by John hij hangt aan de muur hoor! je moet maar gauw kome kijke hahah xxx john are there any other ppl who want to give some feedback pls?

i'll download it and give some good nice feedback..

*edit i had a listen and i liked the build-up towards the qlimax and i liked that one too but then after the qlimax the melody is too much put forward.. you should add a extra layer with a bit a chill melody on the background and soften the melody a bit..
or you could change the synths you use for the melody and use a little bit more chill synths and let the synths fade out longer so you have a more stretched melody (mmm.. it doesn't sound very clear)..

ik hoop dat ik enigsinds duidelijk was en anders je weet me te bereiken!

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Last edited by TimeportE on Oct-08-2002 at 13:11

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Originally posted by TimeportE i'll download it and give some good nice feedback.. *edit i had a listen and i liked the build-up towards the qlimax and i liked that one too but then after the qlimax the melody is too much put forward.. you should add a extra layer with a bit a chill melody on the background and soften the melody a bit.. or you could change the synths you use for the melody and use a little bit more chill synths and let the synths fade out longer so you have a more stretched melody (mmm.. it doesn't sound very clear).. ik hoop dat ik enigsinds duidelijk was en anders je weet me te bereiken!

hehe i know what you mean lucas ill work on that! thnx for the feedback

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John:

The rns file you sent me didn't have the kick and snare samples in it...

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery John: The rns file you sent me didn't have the kick and snare samples in it...

hmm i guess i saved it wrong hehe, ill send you the good .rns when youre on icq

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