First EDM-House-Trance-ish song. Looking for feedback

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robbieayt
tranceaddict in training

Registered: Jun 2014
Location: Australia

First EDM-House-Trance-ish song. Looking for feedback

After many YouTube videos, forums and messing with switches and knobs, I've come up with something that I think is worth listening to:

RLM - Toujours

Any feedback on the mixdown and mastering (or any feed back at all really) would be fantastic

Jun-01-2014 12:05 Australia

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Spacey Orange
still loves trance.

Registered: Jul 2004
Location: California

i wish i could offer some advice to improve it, but i can't because i'm not musically trained. in any case, i really don't like the melody, a lot of sounds really aren't pleasing to the ear. some elements are good, but i think it needs a lot more work.

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Jun-03-2014 05:42 United States

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lost hawk
tranceaddict

Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Bristol

Sounds out of tune to me. A lot of the notes seem to be in different keys. Learning scales and chords would help your melody work. On a positive note the mixing isn't bad and there is some good use of fx in there

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Jun-03-2014 16:10 United Kingdom