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MeLtrA
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Registered: Oct 2002
Location: sweden
Unhappy my first trance tune, need pro feedback...

Took me some time to make this track and now i really need alot of feedback on the sounding..

used reason 2.0 btw..

hope you like it


Meltra - Deep Vision (v16-master).mp3

-énjoy

btw Endre is my kompis...

Last edited by MeLtrA on Oct-20-2002 at 14:50

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Endre
lol space music



Registered: Apr 2002
Location: Space


it suck asshole j/k

you know my damn comments, but in producing-comments the
technical part is not the best, but better than other amatures, but its your first f0ckin track so its good....

you know why its good? its mastered by me

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Arbiter
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It's not bad, even though I'm not a huge fan of the lead synth stabs. If this is your first tune, you've got a lot of potential.

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Mr.Mystery
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Registered: Dec 2001
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I am IMPRESSED!

Lacks a bit in the perc/bass field and it gets a bit repetitive but it's a great tune nonetheless...


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MeLtrA
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thanx for the comments, hoped for more though

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TimeportE
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quote:
Originally posted by MeLtrA
thanx for the comments, hoped for more though

okeej, okeej i'll look into it!

*edit you have a very nice build-up nice job there! in the melody i thought you made some strange descisions.. but still a well but together qlimax.. maybe you could make the qlimax a little bit shorter, get the bass kicking a little bit earlier..
but very impressed indeed, not very original but very good nevertheless!


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Not bad at all. For being amatuer the bass and mastering still sounds pretty damn good. I enjoyed the buildup to the climax. What plug in did you use for this?

JaY


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robstar
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Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Stockholm

VERY NICE!!

And this is your first tune?


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Endre
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Registered: Apr 2002
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i hate to be rude but this aint hes first track, he have remixed some of my tracks before, and they are good as this one, but this takes it all. sooo..now i ruind the party

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robstar
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Hehe...That's what I thought.
But it's still good stuff!

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MeLtrA
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Registered: Oct 2002
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quote:
Originally posted by Endre

i hate to be rude but this aint hes first track, he have remixed some of my tracks before, and they are good as this one, but this takes it all. sooo..now i ruind the party



no, all the tracks befor this one sucked ass... this one is more advanced and sounds 3 times better..

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