Since nobody replies you, I will be the one to tell you the truth.
You're 5 years away from a decent track.
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Mar-22-2015 20:55
Mr.Mystery
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Location: Vantaa
quote:
Originally posted by TranceElevation
You're 5 years away from a decent track.
How did you calculate that?
Mar-22-2015 21:05
TranceElevation
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I'm a visioner.
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cit. "Back then people danced to a dj set. Nowdays they are recording it with their smart phones."
Mar-22-2015 22:05
djnitride
Tiesto played my record
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Location: Texas
Post your track to the WIP thread thats what it is there for
Mar-22-2015 22:21
rubez
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useless!
Mar-23-2015 10:59
Innocence Lost
Uptight Biatch,..
Registered: Jan 2014
Location: THANK THE LORD *for* being born yelluh.
Maybe if you post it in the right section you'll get the right criticism.
Mar-23-2015 13:15
Mr.Mystery
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Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Vantaa
quote:
Originally posted by rubez
useless!
Quite honestly, there's nothing to critique. It's just a beat and very little else.
It's not bad, it's not good, it just... is.
Mar-23-2015 13:39
rubez
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you're just being lazy/incompetent.
the bass needs limited/compressed/sidechained or something. it is clearly too much. the delayed hat could be a little less obviously delayed in the mix. so there is those two things you missed.
and since you say there is little there, you could have elaborated on what it sorely lacks - and what should follow, since i asked for that specifically... for direction.
the WIP thread just seems to be everyone blowing smoke up each others arses.
i wouldn't call this a work in progress. that implies i am going to finish it. this is more like a general brain storming fart!
Last edited by rubez on Mar-23-2015 at 13:57
Mar-23-2015 13:52
Mr.Mystery
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Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Vantaa
quote:
Originally posted by rubez
you're just being lazy/incompetent.
Well, if you don't want to use the thread these sort of things are intended for, that's the best you're going to get.
quote:
Originally posted by rubez
the bass needs limited/compressed/sidechained or something. it is clearly too much. the delayed hat could be a little less obviously delayed in the mix. so there is those two things you missed.
What do you need anyone here for if you already know that?
quote:
Originally posted by rubez
and since you say there is little there, you could have elaborated on what it sorely lacks - and what should follow, since i asked for that specifically... for direction.
If you expect others to write your tracks for you, you need a different hobby. Or a ghost producer.
quote:
Originally posted by rubez
i wouldn't call this a work in progress. that implies i am going to finish it. this is more like a general brain storming fart!
What the fuck are you looking for then? Why should we care about your brain storming farts? Come back when you've actually got something you intend to finish, until then you can keep on whining.
Mar-23-2015 14:07
rubez
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such an eloquent and elaborate dissection of my post - shame you couldn't be arsed to do that with my one-minute track.
what a cock.
i think i'll listen to one of your tracks and see how well it fares...
Mar-23-2015 14:18
Mr.Mystery
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Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Vantaa
quote:
Originally posted by rubez
such an eloquent and elaborate dissection of my post - shame you couldn't be arsed to do that with my one-minute track.
It really is a shame, isn't it?
quote:
Originally posted by rubez
what a cock.
It's massive, I know.
quote:
Originally posted by rubez
i think i'll listen to one of your tracks and see how well it fares...
It'll be available through Beatport in a few weeks