you said it yourself...it sounds fruity! especially the kick and the snare, use other ones! download some from www.analoguesamples.com or some other website (see the production forum)
the melody is nice
the bassline could be louder
but most important, try to get rid of the typical fruity sound... use vsti synths and fx and samples. tho, i cant tell much about fruity cos i use reason:roll:
anyways, hope this helps...good luck and keep it up!

john

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