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Hey, that's not bad for a first attempt. It's very cruisy. Not really my cup of tea but still enjoyable. It got a bit tedious though, maybe you could shorten it up a bit. Also, try and make it build a little more with the percussion. Oh, and try and make changes occur every 32 beats, not 16 (beginning snares).
That's all I have to say, keep up the good work
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