it sounds really nice.. can't think of anything to change except maybe for what you said yourself... hmmm.. and maybe just some delay on the piano melodie, but that's just me

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ok thx mate, i'll see what i can do

anyone else wanna have a listen?

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i really like the beginning of the song.. sounds nice and pretty hard!
but the main synth.. i think its a bit 2 weak.. dunno why but apart from that it sounds great, as usual

grtz,

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thx luuk!
i know about the main synth, i'm fixing that now

greetz,
Wim

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Hey Lightworks!

I haven't replied very often in one of your threads, so I'm gonna do it more often, cuz everyone needs it

I think I know what mantisnl means. When I'm listening with my headphones, very much of the song sounds like it's on the background. Even the percussion in the beginning, it's on the background. Try to use less stereoseperation (do I spell this right?) or something like that and bring it more to the front.
After all, I've nothing more to "complain" (hehe ) about this song. Nice melody, nice buildup, nice break, so I guess this is the only thing you need to change..

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thx regrooved

some other people have asked me to try to add more stereo effects on my drums... but then again some people won't like that hehe

take care,
Wim

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great job man! im working on a tune too.. ill email you it! I defintely loved this though!

Talk to you later,

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the build-up is probably the best one i've ever heard from you! the main melody rocks as well, but the break is rather annoying, especially the piano. the melody is good, but i'd change it with another sound. and i'd add something in the background of the main part as well, perhaps a little sub-melody, it will sound fuller that way. i think with some changes, this track could well turn out to be your best track so far and a club hit in europe!

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hey thx kevin

I'm working on some more elements for the break and some more layer melodies when the main lead is playing (in this demo there were two, but one was too quiet I think).
You mean I should replace the buildup synth with another one or the main synth? or was it the melody that the piano played?

Cheers,
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quote:

Originally posted by Lightworks You mean I should replace the buildup synth with another one or the main synth? or was it the melody that the piano played?

i was talking about the piano. the melody is good, but i think a piano sounds a bit plain in that part, i'd use a synth instead.

anyway, just my opinion...

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that's ok kev, i was thinking of replacing it as well... in fact i've already did this, someone else pointed out that it didn't fit the track's atmosphere.

cheers
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