Hi everyone. Please take a second to download this track and let me know what you think. Please be as honest as possible. Cheese? Plain crap? Would you listen to it for more than a split second? What things do you like about it? Thanks everyone!!

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I'll try to be as honest as possible. I think the melody was slightly cheesy. And very simple. It could also need some more percussion. I would also change that sound that jumps in at 4:46 and acts like the main melody some places in the tune. I liked the quality of it though. It is the choice of sounds I would reconsider. Perhaps you should listen some more to artist in the similar style to that you want to do and get some pinpoints of how to do it. Hope I could help

Peace

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Thanks for listening Fatboy and for your comments! They are greatly appreciated!

Am DLing at the mo, BRB with comments!

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Check My Music

Hello!!

I like that track!,
the melody is kinda cute , and it sounds well to me,
sorry dont know what to add to this though...

will be cool to see more of your work

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tried to dl it, but got this message:

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We are sorry, but the file you are trying to download is larger than the maximum length permitted under current network conditions. Please try again later when network conditions change. The file you were trying to download was 8846524 bytes.

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MUGGETS

Nic ework, I believe the peaks could use some more string power... Maybe a bit more complexness on the hihats

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Check My Music

It's pretty good so far. I like the melodys you use. But I guess I don't like the trasitions. But otherwise it's really good. I would like to hear more of your stuff.

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Yo Yo Ma

Dude I'm trying to download your track and its taking damn forever.

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Mike

Dude I must say your mix is very clean and powerful. I would LOVE LOVE LOVE to hear your take on reverb, EQ, effects, mixing, etc because DAMN thats some very PRO sounding.... sounds.

Melody/etc - good also. I just think me personally would have used a harder synthy/echoey sound for the leads. But then again I don't even have anything like that and would have resorted to a saw tooth or triangle.

Mike

Thanks for all the comments everyone and for taking time out of your day to listen.