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starsurfer
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Registered: Dec 2002
Location: Sydney Australia

My SECOND attempt! Feedback!??

OK, round 2! Thisis my second attempt at a sort of trance tune. Reminds me of Push's Strange World... but not as.. well.. professionally produced.

I know it seems a little lacking.. and the beats need fixing...

This is more uplifting than my last attempt... so I will class this as uplifting trance,

SONG: After the Night
ARTIST: Starsurfer
URL: http://www.pendarand.com/starsurfer...terthenight.mp3

Let me know what you think... also.. where can I download some better bass drums and drum kits for Reason 2?

Cheers

StarSurfer

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Flotser
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Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Tel-Aviv, Israel

Re: My SECOND attempt! Feedback!??

HI there.....

It doesn't sounds so well... ...

first of all the sound of the song is amaturish....
second there sure some stuff to fix
0:25... look how everything doesn't blend together...
and the strings in the background kinda annoying...do somthing about them, i guess also stop changing the main beat so often through the song....

but if its only your second track, dont worry and keep practicing

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Mod1
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Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Peterborough

learn some music keys and stick to them. your track is out of key and evil on the ear!!! sorry

Dec-13-2002 20:52 United Kingdom

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BayouRoach
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Registered: Dec 2002
Location: Diamondhead, Mississippi

For some reason, I actualy like the out of key sound. The song has potential.

Dec-15-2002 03:49 United States

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dEEkAy
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hehe...been listening to it....I kinda like the melody alot.

I'd like to remix it if you can send me the file as REASON or MIDI File. Depends on how u produced it.

Greets, Matthew

Dec-15-2002 04:13

starsurfer
Senior tranceaddict

Registered: Dec 2002
Location: Sydney Australia

Hi Matthew,

thanks for listening to my song.

it was my 2nd attempt.. EVER hehe!

I can certainly email you the Reason 2 file.. it should only be small.... what is your email address?

My newest song is much better.... go to:

http://www.pendarand.com/starsurfer/songs/soniclove.mp3

the song is SONIC LOVE..

Anyways.. let me know your email. You can mail me at: [email protected]

I will send you the reason 2 file.. and let me know what you think of my new song!

Cheers

StarSurfer - Scottie

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Dec-15-2002 11:48

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