please check out my track(s) and give me feedback!!! please!!

range of vision sept 02
new beginnings oct 02
snowblind nov 02
falling dec 02


http://homepage.ntlworld.com/modular1/modular1%20home/

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My Next DJ Dates
March 12th 2005 - Becomeone @ (Sub) Logic, London (w/ Oliver Leighs, Simon Rutherford)
April 7th 2005 - Existence @ The Met Lounge,Peterborough (w/ JFK and Liam Bamford)
April 9th Wildchild @ The Empire, Milton Keynes (late minute replacement for Brisky)
April 16th 2005 - Serious @ The Cross (w/ Jonnie Pickering, Simon Patterson and Judge Jules)
May 5th 2005 - Existence @ The Met Lounge,Peterborough (w/ Riley and Durrant, Liam Bamford)
October 15th 2005 - Serious @ The Cross (w/ Simon Patterson, John O'Callahan, and Judge Jules)

Last edited by Mod1 on Dec-20-2002 at 22:11

well... I must say you have an amazing tune there! Overall it sounds very professional and complex.. though I heard it on dial-up radio, so I can't comment much on sound quality.

I would like to make a constructive critic of this, but I didn't find any big problem with the track.. only small fixes I'd advice you: at around 5:30 or something there's a bit of a sudden change on the melodies that doesn't quite fit.. and I didn't like very much the kick. But apart from that small details, it's quite a brilliant track and I think you have some future!

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thanx for your input. glad u liked it.

i'll download it asap (prolly 2morra or tuesday), i promise, seeing as you were kind enuff 2 leave me feedback

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ok, got it and listened to it fairly loud, what i'm gonna say is for your own good so don't think i'm abusing u

There is quite bad clipping, encode it at a lower volume
It doesn't sound very friendly to mix (I aint mixed it yet so I can't truley comment) but the bass changes straight away and that squealing synth comes in at full power straight away, and it definately sounds a bastad 2 mix out of
The synth seems to be straining somewhat to tower over the other pieces of the tune, dunno how ur gonna fix that, maybe round it off somehow.
Percussion sounds pretty professional especially the snares, albeit some of the hi-hatz are a bit tinny, but this might be the 128k encoding...
The break is too long for the tune, it's epic but simple epic, the break does not suit this style, this is only my preference mind as i get tired from 3 mins hands in the air from planisphere tunes it kinda hurts especially when some dugged ppl grab your hands and hold em there lol.
The synths are original - I like the originality
Sounds like summat Tiësto might play nowadays at the end of his sets,

I'm pretty sure I've seen you say your signed, and so you rightly should be, please lemme know where I can hold of some other stuff, preferably on vinyl

A very happy,
Luke

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automatic records london
www.automaticrecords.co.uk

graham camp - solid union (ian cashman remix)auto18
filter tip - in season (graham camp / ian cashman)auto28
these records are more proggy than 'range of vision'

ive also had 3 techno releases out between '96-'98 but it isnt my thing any more

colourhead - residual current devices (synewave n.y./ geometric)
ian cashman - cracked glass (acruacree)
the unknown - silence is your consent (syncopate)

Last edited by Mod1 on Dec-17-2002 at 21:00

range of vision was my first go at the tiesto big tune kinda thing and ive never been really happy with the mix really. id give it about 6 out of 10 . its just so long ago that i did it i cant be fucked to sort it out cos ive done better tracks since.

ive updated www.mp3.com/modular1 today so there are some new tracks if you want to check them out. they are not finished and i have my own issues with each ('new beginnings' mostly). but they are done enough for me to want opinions b4 i fuck with them too much!!!
check them out please!!!

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http://www.djiancashman.co.uk
My Next DJ Dates
March 12th 2005 - Becomeone @ (Sub) Logic, London (w/ Oliver Leighs, Simon Rutherford)
April 7th 2005 - Existence @ The Met Lounge,Peterborough (w/ JFK and Liam Bamford)
April 9th Wildchild @ The Empire, Milton Keynes (late minute replacement for Brisky)
April 16th 2005 - Serious @ The Cross (w/ Jonnie Pickering, Simon Patterson and Judge Jules)
May 5th 2005 - Existence @ The Met Lounge,Peterborough (w/ Riley and Durrant, Liam Bamford)
October 15th 2005 - Serious @ The Cross (w/ Simon Patterson, John O'Callahan, and Judge Jules)

Last edited by Mod1 on Dec-20-2002 at 00:46

kool, got them all queued now, will let them dl 2morra when i'm out

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Just checked out your tunes - very very cool man you have nothing to worry about.

Mike

Just had a listen to Range Of Vision. Very good production, and like Project T said, the synths are a bit unusual. Great to hear some fresh sounds.

Peace

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im glad people like my stuff but id like some criticism if possible.
there must be something you feel could be improved!!!
i dont want to say what i think needs sorting cos im just going to get people agreeing.

which tracks do your think are the strongest/weakest and why?

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My Next DJ Dates
March 12th 2005 - Becomeone @ (Sub) Logic, London (w/ Oliver Leighs, Simon Rutherford)
April 7th 2005 - Existence @ The Met Lounge,Peterborough (w/ JFK and Liam Bamford)
April 9th Wildchild @ The Empire, Milton Keynes (late minute replacement for Brisky)
April 16th 2005 - Serious @ The Cross (w/ Jonnie Pickering, Simon Patterson and Judge Jules)
May 5th 2005 - Existence @ The Met Lounge,Peterborough (w/ Riley and Durrant, Liam Bamford)
October 15th 2005 - Serious @ The Cross (w/ Simon Patterson, John O'Callahan, and Judge Jules)

lol i thought most of my post was criticism

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