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To start of with, I would ad a crash at the beginning of the track, so you give it the "Look out, it started" feel.

Don't like the sound of the synth @ 2:20

Way to go with the vox and the melody's fade in, smooth as shit, though the really low sounds create a disturbing sound.

The outro sounds a bit too shor tand the end sudden, I would add 8 bars to the outro.

Overall I'd say this deserves a some where between 7.5 - 8.5 outa 10 and also worth a thumbs up so:

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KPYTO However, there are somethings that you could work on:

1) The FX you added to the vocals -> During the very first words (when she says "emotions touch"), I get quite annoyed because it sounds like a phone ringing and I have this urge of running to answer it

2) Add some more synth-lines before the build-up and after the melody stops... it's ok the way it is, but could be better if there were more layers during the non-melodic part

3) By the way, radio versions should be around 3-4 min. If you want more people to listen to your work, you could drop the beat from the beginning (and start from the build-up) and not loop the melody that much

Way to go