wicked lead line u got there mate!! i think the bass and drums could do with some work. you could also try and write another section to the tune as well.....cos although the lead is wicked its weakened by overplaying it...also the offbeat kickdrums at the start would be a bit of a nightmare for a dj!!!


impressed though...good work...keep it up

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Thanks for listening...

And I see what you mean (it could use some more variety). The thing is, that I'm not very experienced as a producer yet. I've been working on this one for quite a long time, and ffs am I fed up with it. I just can't spend more time with it (I thought I'd need to change almost everything), and neither do I want to keep every track I make unfinished.

So I need to move on, cos I can't really concentrate on many tunes at the same time. Maybe I'll do another mix of this later, but for now I'm satisfied enough.