ok, i'm gonna be fairly harsh jeff, close your eyes 
nar, its a top drawer tune, but i reakon there is a couple things that need sorting. some of the percussion sounds well cheap like the clap, and the kick needs more eq as it sounds well basic. there is loads of nice filtering effects at the start, but the start may be a bit long b4 the grungy bassy synth kicks is which is ace btw piano is very nice too. i think i'm goin against the grain here, but the main synth lets the tune tune down and doesnt quite fit with the grungy bass and rather sombre piano, the melody is fine, just the synth seems a bit bland/flat compared to depth in the rest of the tune. altough it does sound rather nice with the filter cuttoff coming in at the end, maybe its just too high end, i dunno. and the lack of bass after the melody has finished might sound weird while mixing, but i dunno yet coz mike + his cd decks are a bit far away atm for me to have a mix with lol
fuckin ace tune tho 
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