I have to say that this is a great effort. A few comments though. I would've preffered a more aggressive, 'screaming' bass sound. This combined with a holden like low end would work great imo. I'm also a sucker for lots of percussion, so I think you could add some more of that to Great production though and nice to hear some fresh ideas in a tune

Peace

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nice tune mate ...i like it...get it properly mastered and itll be large...nice to see some originality

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Good track!
the melody is nice!
I guess it builds in a cool way, the intro until 1:22 is too long maybe.

the clap has a strange sound, like noise or something...
i would use onother clap

the synth at 5:00 is very cool , i love that sound

I like the track.
i guess it's just alittle empty, add some percusion (i'll never know how to spell it right ), and some backround sounds, and you'll have a great super track !

have fun!!

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fooking nice one! Definetly your best and most original yet. Bit at 7:18 is mint! Bassline sounds a bit Tomcraft inspired (not that that's a bad thing of course). Main melody & synth is just fucked up....gets into your brain...very addictive (can't think of a better word). I don't think the intro's too long at all, the whole tune's got a great flow to it.

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Originally posted by Spad Main melody & synth is just fucked up....gets into your brain...very addictive

hehe... would wrong be the word??

cheers for the comments guys, shall take them into consideration

keep em coming!

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Nice work Jeff, original which makes a change with a lot of ppl, so keep up the good stuff

classy mate, very classy
can't help thinking it should be a little more Marco V
harder beat perhaps??
and make more use of that dirty sound that comes in at 5:42
also that vocal sounds mint
it's just plain wrong

charz 4 the replies muchos apreciated..

funny u should say that about the marco v thing. i tested its mixing capabilities and it mixes very nicely into tolerance

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Originally posted by tu_face charz 4 the replies muchos apreciated.. funny u should say that about the marco v thing. i tested its mixing capabilities and it mixes very nicely into tolerance

I was thinking maybe along the lines of this could be the next indicator with a bit of tweaking

what speech program did you use?

thats menacing! sounds really great, some of those bass changes remind me of a green martian track, effect at 4:13 is wicked, good job.