sweet track mate nice n chilled, good smokin music hehe couple of snots:
i think maybe u should start the track with just the pad, and not the tinkly synth.. bring that in later
the break u use from the start right up to the breakdown, although its a very nice break by the time it gets to about 3.5 mins its wearing a little thin.. maybe make some alternate breaks to put in every 4 bars, or some nice twiddly little noises that will make the break sound a lil jumpier... basically the beat needs a little more variation. this goes for after the breakdown also
lovely synth work.. nice sweeping pads structure sounds like uve really thought it out well. as for the ending, very nice indeed
all in all its a quality track, will be staying on ma playlist for a while methinks
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Jan-23-2003 19:56
eLe_vatE
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Registered: Jan 2002
Location: tulse hell
Az, Nils, Luuk, Jeff....thanks for downloading & commenting glad you quite like it.
Jeff, the breaks bore me after a bit too Im not so good with percussion, it took a while to make what you hear, I got bored of doing them after that...
More comments welcome....
Chris
Jan-23-2003 21:58
Mr.Mystery
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Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Vantaa
Yup, the breaks get stale after a while... also, I thought some of the melodies were too quiet.
All in all - a good track that's a bit too long given the elements in it.