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this is a really nice sounding track, but there are a few things that could get sorted out to make it better 
the whole thing needs to be slower, im playing it at -3 now and it sounds about right
if you are going for the progressive sound, u need to work on your drums more, the samples you are using are very ferry corstenesque, which goes for most of trance.. so try and make ur beat sound a lil diff with a few more unique samples/flashy fx hooks.
as flotster said, the high pitched lead synth tends to drown out the rest, so maybe turn the treble down a bit on the lead synth and turn the volume of your beat/perc up to sort out that problem
when that first breakdown crashes in, use something else over the cymbal for added whoosh effect cus the cymbal on its own doesnt quite carry it
it all seems a little busy at times too.. try swapping the melodies about instead of playing lots at once so that the lister doesnt get too lost
the main melody is really good, very unique. also when that first chord change comes in.. oo lala  work hard on this and it will come out a stonkin good tune! 
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