Okie,
I now have 3 drafts here, witch one is the best?

Gil_Schwartz_-_Hope-Original_Mix-First_Draft.mp3


Gil_Schwartz_-_Hope-Original_Mix-Second_Draft.mp3

Gil_Schwartz_-_Hope-Original_Mix-Third_Draft.mp3


Thanks for your time.

Gil Schwartz

Last edited by on Feb-28-2003 at 16:59

ok i listened to the track
first of all the sound quality is really good to me.
Nice fxs and beat
Bass is awesome
I really enjoy the break
Main melody is nice, synths are well placed But!!! I think you could have make it more epic , something that goes higher in notes but thats just my taste
End is funny but its definately a dj killer.
Overall a nice track but i really think you should change the melody.

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nah its not a dj killer, i gave 27 seconds to the mix and then killed the dj

i'll think about changing the melody with higher notes but for now i think i'll just keep it as it is.

10x for your comment.

i do like the song A LOT..

to me fx are more than fine, base components like hats crash reverse kicks everything its excelent , the quality of the song, kicks ass. everything its so good to me, but i dont like the melody too much, i mean, the instrument is good and the sequence and everything but is the same melody with the song, i dont know its like a chiwi melody hehe,, but is fine to my ears,
and the end, damn you will cuz me a serious problem to mix that hehehe, but it was different and cool,
the song to me 9/10
the melody 7/10

nice song dude ..

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thanks man, i updated few things in the tune, i'll upload the 2nd draft later today...
what i did was changing the bassline so it will fit more to the track, replaced a backup melody's sound and defined that transition to the DJ KILLER part

I like the track a lot.. very smooth. Really nice ending

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Check out my latest track:
enLounge - Secret Beach

super track! Can't wait for the next drafts.

I just wanted to say that i really respect u, gil, as an artist. U accept criticism and instead of just flaming back to people who say things like "well, this was wrong" or "not my style", u actually accept feedback on how to make it better. Not only do u listen, but then u change the tracks to fit us, ur listeners. It's great to see artists who are more about pleasing the fans instead of just sending promo after promo ($$$)

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Thank You and Goodnight

thanks mate,
i was this kind of guy who flame back but people change (and grow up)

anyways, 2 more drafts will be here shortly...
i am really looking foward to see what you think about them.
although they aren't so diffrent but there is a diffrance where there should be
for instence, the breakbit part on the 2nd draft is the same
but on the 3rd... my my my

Ok, 2 more versions are here!

The third rocks!!!

got the first one, the other to are on there way will post all at once once listened

Superrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!
Especially the third version......with a good outro
;-)

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third drafts best, but i just can;'t bring my self to like the ending on all, maby after the slow part if it build back up so it could be mixed then it would be better. but everything else is amazing!!!