hey guyz...

what do u think of this track I started making? how does it sound?

Im learning Logic Platinum, and trying different things... u know...
the samples r mixed in about 5 mins, just for a demo...
check it out... tell me what u think...

Klubbshake - Secret Project (1st Demo)

hehe...logic....what did i tell ya!

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anyone else downloaded?

yeah, thats pretty fat, and bad ass.

Make a punisher out of this.

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Hehe....thanx bro =))

i will make a punisher out of this one... =))

Hmm...this track sounds interesting. Of course, I noticed it sounds dry without FX, such as Reverb, or Delays, but the actual melody at 1:13 when the kicks come in is BAD ASS! I just think there's one sound, that's kinda...dull. It's this wooden sound that starts at 22. I think it needs to either be replaced, OR the notes have to be tweaked. To me, it was disturbing the energy of the track. The opening pad & note selection is cool, and the FX that begins at 16 is cool. Is it me or does it pan to the left to right speaker? (don't have headphones on)

I think you need to add one more instrument to make it sound fuller. Perhaps, interlapping notes? I'm a beginner producer for about 11 months, and I'm still trying to master my music, which I've been hard at work with. Overall, this track can be monsterous, if you keep tweaking it. And if you plan on completing it, see how well this track fits in, with a dark progressive, or trance set. If it fits in, then this track can alter the mood of a set. Pretty dark.


Oh yeah, it wouldn't hurt if you added some percussions, but that's just me. Well, just my opinion. Disregard if necessary. -Mental

daaaymmm.....
great feedback bro.... but theres a few things that made me smile =))))
Delays and Reverbs.... everysound, including percussions, has delay.... lol...i dont know man, my friends r saying that theres is too much delay..... lol...

You said, add more percussions....... ummmm....well..... I have 6 percussion lines.... theres a lot of them, believe me, they just probably not loud enough, coz the track is not mastered....


That sound that starts at 16..... yeah.....it goes from left to rite, and back...=))

Thanks for ur feedback =)

mmmmm 8.2 le falta EQ

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Hmm...listenin again. This track could indeed do some wonders if you mastered it a little. Damn, your right the percs were a little low. I like how you lowered the clap; did you alter the note of the clap, or did you stretch it? Not too much reverb on it either, but it sounds good!


1:13, b4 that bad ass beat comes in, IF you want, put some cool ass sound, so people on the dancefloor would drop their jaws. The beat is on, but I think that main synth that starts at 43 could use some 'filtering' effects. But the delaying is right on, and it makes the beat sound complex.


I love that one sound that's delayed, and panning around the track. It accompanies the main synth melody at :43, and has that wicked delay/ (and I think I hear a flanger effect too.)


I see where you going with this track; a sorta 'underground' rave sound, which will blow people's minds away. It doesn't have no cheesey elements which is good, and none of that 'predictable' note pattern. You know how you hear an amatuer produced track, and when you hear the first note, you can guess the next 4, or 5 notes? Well, this one lacked that, and it had some originality. Play with the track, mix it up, and take your time. It's pretty cool; I'm not gonna critique no more cuz it's not done. Later. -Mental