well produced but I somehow think there is missing something:

a) a melody ?

b) vocals ( female, girls, or something like the horrorist )


Just add some "spice" to it to make it sound alive...

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Female girl vocals, hmmm, maybe, I'll think about it. Horrorist style stuff might be pretty funny.

Melody, nah, that's not what I'm going for. You probably noticed the bassline isn't in a particular key either, which would make it hard to put any reasonable melody in there, and I love the bassline and wouldn't consider changing it =)

It could possibly use some more effects/fills, but it was designed with a dancefloor in mind as opposed to something to throw on a quiet volume and relax to =)

Thanks for the comments!

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Originally posted by dj-sean It could possibly use some more effects/fills, but it was designed with a dancefloor in mind as opposed to something to throw on a quiet volume and relax to =)

Try making 2 versions.. a dance/club version and a vocal version like The Horrorist.. but make sure the lyrics are good.. like The Horrorist.. that shit is legendary!

" HE F****D ALL NIGHT!! "

no one's ever gonna forget that line man!

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hmmm...perhaps I should make some horrorist style sound, too. The idea is fascinating me...I remember all the ravers in club when he says: f***ed her all night *lol* they went mad...

your track got huge potential...could turn into a real awesome track

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" HE F****D ALL NIGHT!! "