here's a song i've been working on with dj Kardio. We have been making music for about a year and a half now and this is our second song we've ever done...we would love some feedback, criticism, comments, thoughts, suggestions, etc.

the song is called "Fantasy" and it's on the bouncey melodic side of things...it's a work in progress so we look forward to all critiques!


http://carter.ath.cx/Misc.%20Music%...tasymixdown.mp3









thanks a bunch!

You should use a different sample for the kick or cut down the low frequencies a little cuz there seems to be too much "boom" on it. Also work on the synth line...it sounds a little repetitive.

Fine work guys!

The production is good, I dig the skippity kick in there. I think the snare needs a bit of fine-tuning, maybe make it thicker with a little more reverb. You guys did a sooperb job changing the dynamic of the lead synth in the second half of the tune.

What did you use to make the tune?

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Originally posted by sooper Fine work guys! The production is good, I dig the skippity kick in there. I think the snare needs a bit of fine-tuning, maybe make it thicker with a little more reverb. You guys did a sooperb job changing the dynamic of the lead synth in the second half of the tune. What did you use to make the tune?

Yup... samething fix up the snare, also... the Hi-Hats could use a touch up to. I say add another hi-hat that hits at a faster rate on top of what you have. Other then that sounds great!!!