Interesting intro. If i can be frank, the lead is terrible. it really hurts to listen to. Everything else about this track is well thought and well produced. Mostly pro sounding. But really, the lead. I would try to diversify the track a little more. everything seems to be part of or related directly to the lead. Im really diggin those breaks. Your percussion is for the most part really good. Just please, get a different sample for the lead.

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Originally posted by nic01445 Interesting intro. If i can be frank, the lead is terrible. it really hurts to listen to. Everything else about this track is well thought and well produced. Mostly pro sounding. But really, the lead. I would try to diversify the track a little more. everything seems to be part of or related directly to the lead. Im really diggin those breaks. Your percussion is for the most part really good. Just please, get a different sample for the lead.

i agree with everythin said...the lead hurts...i dont kno wha or why but it really hurts...everythin else is tight...keep it up

thx for the replies

my headphones weren't working so i had to use my crappy speakers for a couple weeks and i couldn't really hear what was wrong with my lead...

but i went to future shop and bought myself a new pair of decent headphones and now i can see there's something wrong with the lead

i'm gonna fix it up and post the song up again

thx a lot!!!

Last edited by J.L. on Apr-20-2003 at 05:15

is this a joke?

TRAntS

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Originally posted by TRanTS is this a joke? TRAntS

umm, no.

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Originally posted by TRanTS is this a joke? TRAntS

If you're going to post on his track at least say something productive.

yeah its terrible. it needs an actual structure, not to mention better quality samples and actual variety, rather than the same pattern played over and over.

keep producing, and try creating a normal trance structure first before adding variety and getting a good sound.

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Originally posted by nic01445 If you're going to post on his track at least say something productive.

sorry thats just the first thing I thought when I heard it. it is saying something productive, if you know what it means.

TR

i listened to it, and i have to tell you i don't really like it.

like the others said: the main lead really sucks.
further the bassline is much too weak, i always have the feeling that the bassline used is just an interlude and the "real" bassline will begin soon.

the ideas are good but the realisation isn't.

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Originally posted by TRanTS sorry thats just the first thing I thought when I heard it. it is saying something productive, if you know what it means. TR

No. You are wrong. You did not help at all. How does "Is this a joke?" provide him with any helpful advice? If you are going to insult his work, please insult it in a way that might help him learn from his mistakes.