Hello people...

I wanted a few comments on a tune I've been working on mainly yesterday & today..

u can get the full 128kbps mp3 here:

http://www.expanse-recordings.co.uk...xtended_mix.mp3

Its my 1st solo production, I've done a couple of tracks with Luke (Project T) in fruity before...this is my 1st ever dabbling with reason

all comments welcome

cheers

George

Last edited by George Kendall on Jul-07-2003 at 00:45

alrite here goes

you got something good going with this!
this is sounding good with lots of potential!

the kicks nice! powerful but not overpowering!
the clap fits in well!
i think the lead thing in the backround is quality! near the 1 min mark! i like the lead sound youve used as well! it reminds me of a kid vicious lead or something which isnt really a bad thing!
the breakdown is very good! it doesnt get boring!

although

i think the hihats are good but i think you should maybe add another hat as well to give it more energy!
after the break at 4.30 you need more enrgy coming out that! perhaps the hats would fit in there?!

overall sounding good!

let me know how it goes

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yea after the break it definately needs something

I'm going to change the lowest part to the bass to give it a more driving feel

Thanx for the comments...I'll probably update the percussion...its pretty basic atm....damn the batteries in my cordless mouse

Hmm, interesting.

The intro needs a bit of fx or someting to keep the interest... and the lead could use a different sound.

Other than that, I like it. Sweet and lush... but a bit short, don't you think? I was just getting into it and then it ended

Nice job anyway.

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Yea....if I can liven up the lead with your's & justin's help I'll make a short second break...coz atm it'd be too boring to add 1

Very nice kick! I like the track, nice melody and structure. Definitely a lot of potential here! To improve, I'd basically just throw in some more elements, to add interest. But yea, decent track, I also agree that it seems a bit short.

very decent one you got going here, i see lots of nice elements. all i can say is the somewhat sudden-ending you could take care of, otherwise it's a nice tune

cheers,
LW

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Just updated the link...has a better lead/melody and overall sound.

actually just remastered this version after I uploaded but bleh!

looks like I'll be doing another extended version anyway

Right updated it with a better sounding extended version....

still not happy with the lead, but thats about the only thing I'm gonna sort and maybe mess with the strings a little..although they are only subtle...they are a bit naff

An excellent track.
I really like it, but I agree the lead could be more powerful

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still not happy with the lead, but thats about the only thing I'm gonna sort and maybe mess with the strings a little..although they are only subtle...they are a bit naff

I will look forward to hearing the final product then

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great tune! i like the melody and the lead. i listened to the 6.50 and the 8.59 version and the last one is better, tho i think the kick is too loud. the low strings in the main bit are too loud as well..or have too much bass or something like that..i dont know
good track!

john

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really cool tune. the melody on this sucker is massive. the bassline is orgasmic...lol...just one f'ckin wonderful tune. i really enjoyed it from beginnin to end. u got some serious skill...keep it up