Nice , all I would say is make the break a little bit shorter (the pause). Also can you post another sample after the build-up? I would really like to hear the full track, seems nice . Good work

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ya i agree, get rid of the pause. i love that part that comes after it, i hope from that point you're working it up to a big explosion with lots of energy.

good work

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Hi Yevat , your music is coming along nicely , you seem to be really getting the hang of things now and this song is a song that could get you a name quite fast , the title is spot on and track moves at a hiped up fast pace and comes to the point of no return when the bass drops and everything goes quite and from then no moves into a nice melody that makes you feel like on the eage . I see that other people tolled you to get rid of the pause , but don`t it is spot on , it gives it more emotion and meaning when it stops which only the best songs do , all I would do is put in a bassline progression that moves with the melodi and the song would be spot on . Nice one Yevat .

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Nice pice of work but the only thin you need is a base line progresive but part form that it's good.

thanx ALOT peeps!! cool!! and wb pete!... um... i DID do something with the silent bit... see if it is better?... this is a whole update to the one above, but it aint done yet...lol.... im thinking aboutputtin in some soft pads after the uplift part... um... here ya go

dude this is phat! again its soo slow for me. but i raised the pitch and it sounds phat dude! nice work.

excuse me for being stupid but how do you raise the pitch. is there a pitch control on winamp?

yo yevat,

Nice ass track. good symphonic pads you got going there. Definetly a good one to download once you are done with it. Keep it going.

DOwnload a full track that I released from my site, www.mp3.com/djharmony and tell me what you think of it. The track is titled Glowsticks on Trance.

Thanks.

Keep it movin'

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haha. Im dead serious. If you take a listen to my track Yevat, the pause in the 2nd fix that you did does need the bassline to be hooked into the silence so that your listners arent totally takin' a head/foot break on the dance floor. the best way to know if you need a bassline on pauses or to develope dope pauses is to honestly in the studio crank up the spkers and let loose yourself and than you'll notice when the pause creeps up your like what the hell i wish so and so had a bassline...so moral of the story, sometimes play the part of the trance-ER.

But other than that, as I said in my last post, smooth synths going there.

Anxious to hear what you gotta say about my track! peace bro.

DJ HARMONY
'Glowsticks on Trance', top 25 on mp3.com

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Originally posted by djharmony haha. Im dead serious. If you take a listen to my track Yevat, the pause in the 2nd fix that you did does need the bassline to be hooked into the silence so that your listners arent totally takin' a head/foot break on the dance floor. the best way to know if you need a bassline on pauses or to develope dope pauses is to honestly in the studio crank up the spkers and let loose yourself and than you'll notice when the pause creeps up your like what the hell i wish so and so had a bassline...so moral of the story, sometimes play the part of the trance-ER. But other than that, as I said in my last post, smooth synths going there. Anxious to hear what you gotta say about my track! peace bro. DJ HARMONY 'Glowsticks on Trance', top 25 on mp3.com

I was going to let this one slide , but once I had a listen to your song , I now know that you don`t know what you are talking about . I`m not having a go at you or anything but I think your song is crap , and how it got to number 25 no mp3 . com was from posting on other forums like this one . Also I don`t think a bassline needs to be added when it becomes quite in Yevats song , you will find that Yevats pause happens in most Trance songs .

The pause is there because of the change in music { notes } and every song is not just produced to dance to . Adding a pause like this leaves you in suspence waiting to see what happens next , which really grabs the listeners attention .

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Originally posted by amit dude this is phat! again its soo slow for me. but i raised the pitch and it sounds phat dude! nice work.

Strange you must like Techno , trance starts to lose its feal above 150 bpm

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