this is pretty cool, the 303s are pretty damn excellent too. i dont think the melody quite works unfortunately, aint really your fault tho. some of the areas sound a bit too heavy and filled, whereas other sections of the mix sound pretty empty, for example when the melody kicks in for the first time it sounds a bit bare, but on the contrary it sounds a bit hectic at the start of the tune, well for that early on it sounds a bit hectic for me . some filter or volume modulation in certain parts as some of the transitions sound a bit too sharp if you know what i mean. the sound is pretty crystal clear and well done. only other thing i can suggest is some perc fuck abouts and random fx, the way shokk used to 
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