Something a bit darker than my usual stuff.

Only a 4minute sample so far, still got work 2 do on it.

Let me know what you think so far neway.

Cheers

Direct Download by the way.

http://fileserv5.soundclick.com/fas...onceptpluto.mp3

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Last edited by ManTrance on May-26-2004 at 22:41

Don't seem to work ?

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Your link... The page cannot be found

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Link fixed now.

Left out a backslash.

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File not found on the server.

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What a nightmare.

Link is DEFINETLY fixed now.

Shouldnt post when smoking

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Bump

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Nice bass, its eating the kick though. The kick needs to be punchier.
The melody is pretty average. The break is too empty/thin. I have heard better things from you. Anyway, its just my opinion.

Read this please - http://www.tranceaddict.com/forum/s...threadid=179791

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Bassline is nice.

Was there a like 7 or 8 snare rolls in the track. Think there was. Half of that would have been enough.

I didn't hear any breakdown.


Work on it.

That's coming along pretty well, mate. There's still a bit of 'beefing up' to be done, to make it sound fuller and less on the bland side, but apart from that you're definitely well on your way to having a future 'hit'.

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Cheers for the comments guys.

Think I'm gunna rework this 1. Not happy with the mixing and EQ.

MART - Cheers for the comments, you're quite local to me. Where bouts do u go out in reading?

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Originally posted by ManTrance MART - Cheers for the comments, you're quite local to me. Where bouts do u go out in reading?

I don't, I'm a social recluse.

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