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Dang I wonder why no one commented!

- Nice intro, very scary indeed!
- A little fast for my tastes, but its a nice break from my usual 133 BPMs.
- Nice dark snares, I'm going to need that sample from you!
- The snare needs work as it is too dry. Maybe make it longer or add that later reflection reeverb. Or use a different sound.
- Those synths at 2:05 are good, but maybe make a more suddle introduction of them.
- Nice synths at 3:10, a good transition to the track. They sound almost middle eastern. How did you make that synth?
- I like the breakdown at 5:30 its soo spooky!
- Those toms are cool, but maybe a bit too loud!
- I say add some syncopated, tribal drums, just to add a driving feel to it, as it seems to be a buildup toward something and never gets the full energy one could wish for.

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Originally posted by cybernetica Hey! Got a new track ready... I've spent a lot of time on this one so I'd like to know what you think about it. It is called "Dominion" and provides some quite fast (150BPM) and Dark Trance with Goa/Psy-Elements. It contains cold and eerie atmospheric pads as well as hard acidlines and some Psy FX. Prepare for something to scare you Download Cybernetica - Dominion

I can see this on a 'Terror Trance from Hell!!' mix for sure.

Good job cybernetica. very unique.

0:00 - 0:40 good intro. spacy.

0:50 bass enters. interesting. I wouldnt mind if the bass wass 'fuller' & maybe even deeper.

1:20 spacy pads. erie/spooky!

2:40 I think something is missing. needs more 'guts'?? the pads you are playing are great & give a darkly charged atmosphere. It feels there needs to be more to it//?

3:00 insane chaos beat hehe. it works with this tune.

4:00 I like how this comes together.

4:40 changes shape. new pads. sounds pretty good. very dark & trancy.

6:10 i like that rythme with that ping-ponging echo effect. the original bit comes back in. Nice layering.

8:00 another new rythme.


I like your style. I havent heard anything like this on trance addict before. Keep it up; your tapping into a bizaar twisted genera. I think you can take this weird electronica to a aweseomely new twisted level. keep it up cybernetica!

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I always liked your productions, and this is the best of you.

Yet another cybernetica track!
You should try to get ur stuff signed dude! it ROCKS!

We're on the same style here
Didn't like the pads at the start.
you need another layer for the bass.
it's nice overall.

2.9/5
production itself need improvement

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Wicked cool fx.

I don't really like that kick in the intro. It interupts everything.

Good and fast, nice.

Bass needs less high end or more low end, maybe. Something's wrong with it.

Nice panning synth.

I'm really liking these pads.

Tech trance section? Trippy.

I think I figured out what I don't like about the bass. It's too centered. Separate it a bit, stereowise.

Cool track. Nice dark sound overall. It never really gets a melody going, and it's all the better because of that. The speed really helped finish off that edgy feel throughout.

Thanks a lot all of you guys ... glad you like it.

jex, do you mean I should pan my bassline around or should I use 2 bassline layers, one panned to the right, one to the left?

repost the track please

i wanna hear this

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