i dont quite know what ive created here...

its up to u guys, the trance addict posse to find out!

polished version

download full 160kbps

i know its not very lengthy (capping out at 5:46) but i couldnt think of anymore melodys or ideas to chuck in there :/

ive tried my best to EQ and compress it, so there might be a little bit of clipping etc

but this is my first time creating something totally original

edit:

ive polished up the percussions, though the previous version was a bit muddy, i decided to clean up the kick, not that it makes lots of difference, but it was worth a go




thanks

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Last edited by KilldaDJ on Jan-26-2005 at 02:28

downloading...

interesting bassline...not my style too fast :-P but it goes well with the kick

the melody is pretty tight i like it

the break is great, my favorite part.

lots of energy in this song man. sounds good :-)

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thanks dude, my style is usually hard hitting and engergetic uk trance

thanks for the review

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dont really like the bass, too muddy and not enough tone to it. kick is nice. this sounds reeeally lofi for being 160kbps. dont really like the choppy synth that comes in. a lot of weird transitions going on during the breakdown, really confusing. the melody is kinda cool.

not much else to say. there are some good ideas here, just need a lot of polishing.

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yeah, thought it was too cheesy for tranceaddicts

cheers for the review

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I like it

Seems like it would fit well in a hardhouse/hardtrance set

Yeah, a bit more polishing and tune up on the EQ's and this track would be mint!

Keep it up!

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hmm..thanks dude, my style has always been a harder trance

the EQing stinks as im just rubbish at EQing

thanks for the review

edit : ive noticed the bassline sounds similar to alice deejay - better off alone :s

eeh, euro trance it is now LOL

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lol @ alice comment.. it is all too similar lol

anyway.. a quick tip on eqing and voluming...

heres what i do..

when my kicks clip, ill bring them down (or out altogether) and then turn everything else thats obscenely loud around that down too, then bring the kicks back up, which tends to stop clipping.

as for EQing, it sounds like youve went and put the high ends in just about everything up max.. which is where

quote:

this sounds reeeally lofi for being 160kbps

would come from. Turn off most of the high eq's, and cut the bass ranges of them instead.. it creates the same effect as upping the highs, without the problem of everything trying to be louder than everything else.

i'd like to hear this one finished off a bit more.. cleaned up, given a shave etc. could have some real nice potential.

Steve

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thanks for the tip

um, so i should cut down the high end and not make the kick clip or something? because right now, i got my kick EQed and compressed but im a bit confused on how the spectrum of the kick would look like.

right now the entire track has a mix of mid ranges and low ends, how 'should' the track look like on the sound spectrum? as i dont really have a ear for EQ, i prefer to look at the song rather than hearing it, as im assuming u guys have superior sound equipment than i have. the track may sound different on ur system etc but will always look the same on the sound spectrum (if u get what i mean)

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yo dude,

here's a quick visual aid to the explanation:

EQing Direction

I'm gunna trawl TA for the best tips, and put them together on that website, so keep checking it.

Steve

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Originally posted by dj dawson uk yo dude, here's a quick visual aid to the explanation: EQing Direction I'm gunna trawl TA for the best tips, and put them together on that website, so keep checking it. Steve

ah, thats more like it

more tips like that please should i apply that algorithm to what? kick? leads? im retard when it comes to EQing dont know what goes where or how things should sound etc

very helpful site though, thanks

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Just to reiterate on what has been said...the melody is quite nice but it does seem awfully muddy for 160kbs!!

The percs and fills are pro and the bassline sound is fine by my standard!

Alice Deejay!! YEAH! LOL

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