Not bad at all man,this is very good,I dont find it boring,and synths are well used,sounds me kinda like Jean Michel Jarre in his Cronology album at parts,I like it,kee it up .
Kopi =o.

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Has a Holden (nothing returning)/Schulz kind of basswave there in the first mini-break, but that's not right, sounds like someone else, can't pin it atm!

Some of the elements after the first mini-break aren't quite clicking, and that's alright, its still working.

to add variation, maybe have a bit more fun with the kick progression, every now and then at the right timing have some fun with it, add some personality to it, change up the sequencing for a bar.

maybe you need another sub-melody if that's what's bothering you, but withhold it until the main breakdown (?)

it sounds fairly good so far. not too fond of the way the track progesses with that stronger lead at the end of the mini-break, could have used a half bar lull or build into it for a bar, kind of sudden when most of the break and track build an ambient but powerful and earthly atmosphere.

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I don't know if it's me, but this lead I am sure I heard it before! On the rest it is a very nice production. Only one thing I am not fond of, and that is the synth that u hear in the end, with the filter on it. It sounds a bit done, that's all!

nice stuff m8

You must work on the drums, because the beat is thin, while the synth lines and bassline are good !

Do an awesome beat on it and it will be flawless !

definately a cool track, Love the style of it.. It stays euphouric without getting too fluffy (which i hate the real fluffines). It has a very chillout feel while, it can be ok to dance to.

good stuff

peace,

jay

ps: maybe get some acoustic sounds involved just a suggestion

MONO!!!!!!!!!!

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Originally posted by Ian^ MONO!!!!!!!!!!

yeah, sure

not bad
what ever happen to the mirco de govia bootleg?

it's like slowed down svenson and gielen
I honestly don't see whats progressive about it?

When the song kicks into gear at the middle/end, it's really addictive. Otherwise I don't like the drum solo at the start.

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Ok, let's see (or hear) :P.

Oeh, that dubble kick is a nice idea, but it gives your track too much energy at one place. Try to decrompress the extra note a bit. Nice synth-effect. Bass is ok, lot of compression there? This makes me think of Tiesto's Obsession.

Ok, rest is fine. But one thing about the bass, it's just one compressed pad-tone. It would be nice to add a real bass. That makes it feel finished I think. I would like to hear the full track!

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