http://www.z-plutonia.com/symbols3.1.mp3

Any help or suggestions would be great. Made this short sample last night and hoping to continue to make it into a remix.

hmm nothing special.
try thickening your kick and bass.

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I'm quite digging on the melody. Its a good starting point for a track but you'll need some variation. That filter at 0.43 sounds like the one off the DJM600? Am I right??

The percs need more work obviously. The highhats lack definition and the kick is too weak and seem overpowered by the clap/snare. But as a starting point its not too bad... it feels like its ready to go somewhere.

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Originally posted by Axolotyl I'm quite digging on the melody. Its a good starting point for a track but you'll need some variation. That filter at 0.43 sounds like the one off the DJM600? Am I right?? The percs need more work obviously. The highhats lack definition and the kick is too weak and seem overpowered by the clap/snare. But as a starting point its not too bad... it feels like its ready to go somewhere.

Thanks...

The Filter is just the basic fruity filter

Update

http://www.z-plutonia.com/symbols3.4.mp3

hmm.
i see no major improvement in this.

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First, I'll start off by saying that Fictivision vs C-Quence - Symbols is one of my favorite Trance tunes ever.

With that said, I really like your version. Although I would like to listen to the whole thing finished before making a judgement.

Upload it soon! I want to hear it!

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Originally posted by woscar99 First, I'll start off by saying that Fictivision vs C-Quence - Symbols is one of my favorite Trance tunes ever. With that said, I really like your version. Although I would like to listen to the whole thing finished before making a judgement. Upload it soon! I want to hear it!

I probably wont finish it due to CPU usage in fruity. It sucks

hehe liked this track C-Quence is doing a remix of our Track The Way atm!

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Update:
http://www.z-plutonia.com/symbols3.6.mp3

I'm out of ideas...anyone wanna suggest some stuff? Especially for the intro...i'm not good with intros.

Is everything clear enough? Seems like he volume goes down on a few parts sometimes...what would that be?

Sorry, this is the first actual song i'm remixing thats coming out better than any of the others

Next update wont be for a few days as I've hit above 95CPU usage and it's crapping out

Have to record each part now as ozze told me to do

everything is to clear, dont try to pump up high frequencies like a mad man, if you go compressing then you get these volume differences. I like that weird synth u are using in the beginning but your strcuture is very weak so far. I think you should listen a bit more carefully to other trance tracks for a better intro. Your percussion is very weak as well, just a high hat and a clap thats on the wrong note. Your main synth is ok but you just took the melody and made a synth under that, its nothing special. Keep working on it!

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http://www.z-plutonia.com/symbols3.7

Starting a collab with another person on this...he's wicked at percussion so the song might finish