hi there everyone, just finished this new track yesterday and thought id post it up here for a bit of C & C.

here's the link:

http://home.iprimus.com.au/bapgoodl...20Remix%20).mp3

details:

Quality: 192kbps
Length: 11mins 49secs
Genre: Progressive Trance
Midi from Trance-midi.tk, i forget who made it tho.

I made this remix and i havent heard the original song yet TT

voc my own :P

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Last edited by AniG on Jun-03-2005 at 12:30

was hoping for atleast 1 reply T_T...

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Woah lots of energy on this and very cool sound effects going on in the back ground Woah! I like the sounds you used. Acid is NICE 3:00 Nice pad after 5:00 I think the synth is a lill too high pitched or has a weird effect on it that sounds a bit annoying, besides that cant complain.

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thanks for your comments, hopefully some more ppl post :P

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downloading now with miy 56k modem , i love the original

Tho the track is at 192... it sounds lo-fi

You need to make the bassline more present, I don't know I just don't feel enough bass in the track.

Your sounds are flat, the melodies are nice but the synths need to be warmer, that is perhaps the song sound lo-fi.

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I like the intro the main lead sound real close to the original (i love it .
Energetic build up a 5:30 ,
The bass in the 10:00 is clipping
In general the track sound too "mono" a dry imo. try using a stereo enhancer and reveerb too.
about the vocals i dont like, but maybe is my taste :P

sorry for my poor review but my english is so limited.
Overall i like the work, only need a better mix. keep working

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Originally posted by AniG I made this remix and i havent heard the original song yet TT

lol Oh well, I havent heard the original either, so ill treat it as your own.

-interesting intro. I like that poly sound.
-The bass drum is very hard & overwhelming!
-The bass could be turned up.
-percs ok.
5.45- heaps of energy here when the bassdrum kicks in. Such a huge wall of sound coming out of my monitors. Nice synths, though they sound a little generic.
-Track flows nicely. good layering.

Good job mate. excellent progression through this track.
I wouldnt mind hearing a better quality version though!!- maybe 256Kbps??

Xeno.

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thanks for your comments, ill look into it further to try to improve the quality of the track.

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Downloading, haha I have a mega and I am downloading at 12 and are 16 megas, LOL, I think u have exceded ur bandwitch, gonna left my pc downloading, when is done I will review u .
Kopi =o.

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Acid in intro is cool.

Your kick is kind of hard and bothersome, considering the prog feel you want to be going for.

This track sounds very mono. There's not much of a stereo sound to go on. Your track also seems a tad muddy, and adding in some panning on one or two things may help.

This pad would sound sooooo cool with a Stereo Enhancer dropped on it.

5:50 thereabouts is really energetic. Good work with that.

I'm getting some unwanted distortion a lot in this track. Be sure that you're not rendering this thing too loudly.

My biggest suggestion for you is to give everything more of a stereo presence. Everything I heard came from the center of my field of hearing. Have your percs spread across the panning range, and set some of your synths off of center so that they can have panning channels to themselves. Finally, make that pad fill just about every space it can. It sounds wonderfully big as it is, but the impression I got is that it could have been bigger.

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