I have taken on-board the feedback from the vocal mix in an attempt to improve the track.
This version is intended to be less cheesy then the vocal mix More of a summer trance track if you like.
Its also not strictly a dub mix either, some vocals are still there, albeit heavily processed, so I dont think they count
I have changed the acid sample to make it more evil sounding.
Added an additional synth on the intro and middle.
Edited the string melody slightly.
Added a cool vocoder effect on the breakdown vox.
Added some chopped up/panned vox fx around the place
Removed the rest of the vocals.
Added some additional fx to the track.
Made the synth arpeggio louder.
And changed some of the song structure slightly.
All feedback positive & negative welcomed.
Luv ya
Brendan
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Jun-23-2005 23:16
Allen&Bream
Suspended User
Registered: May 2005
Location: New York
Love it. The beginning part doesn' sound right to me for some reason. Just that 10 - 20 sec intro. But I love the rest
Jun-23-2005 23:21
1mason11
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2003
Location: Munich
great stuff mate.thx for sharing
Jun-24-2005 00:51
DC76
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2003
Location: Shawnigan Lake, BC, Canada
Me likey!
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Jun-24-2005 02:13
PDM
Legacy
Registered: Nov 2004
Location: Fresno, CA
Hey Buddy, I def. Like this version than the other.
I like those vocals panning the first minutes.
That little snare roll before the break was pretty cool.
What a vocoded lyrics!!! Nice job!!! I have always wondered how to do that....
Maybe is only me, but I rather see the melodies are sad than summerish... but that is just the way I take the track, which I really really like.
Nice tune, I hope you give me permission to spin this.
i have listened to both versions now and i think i prefer this one. I don't really dig the melody too much tho :-\
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Jun-24-2005 10:35
Aquarian
king of no pants
Registered: May 2005
Location: Laval, Quebec
effing amazing
Jun-24-2005 10:37
Stino
= Vast Vision
Registered: Jul 2004
Location: Bergen op Zoom
intro sounds pretty cool but the i miss some sort of lower bassline for some reason...i would also check the volumes of the different parts, sounds a bit unbalanced. I think the braek is awfull....that vocal and strings are extremely cheezy and old skool, dont like it all. Climax is better but i still think its too simplistic for my taste. I also think the percussion is generic and misses variation. If you want to go for a summerish track i would at least at some nice panning congo and percu lines.
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