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| quote: | Originally posted by tylerc
Ok from the start it sounds nice, but that clap is WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY too loud. That needs to be cut in half at least and turn the reverb waay down as well. It's already getting irritating to listen to becuase of that clap. In that break your synths are a bit too loud as well, bass sounds nice, but itss hard to hear under all the other stuff. Nice choir pads during the break. The lead isnt bad by any means, but it could use a bit of brightening. But I'm now at 4:30 in and I just can't listen anymore cuz of that clap. I would suggest going back and doing a lot of work on levels. Other than that it sounds pretty good. |
agree completely, also the level of the hi's is way to high... a bit hard on the ears. I can barely hear the low end because of that when i turn it up...
the melody is fine, the arrangement is alright: those are usualy artists choice, not my preference cause it sounds a bit uninspired- but i think even that would sound way better once the hi's are dealt with.
those are just opinions and some improvements i think you can make, this song has a lot of potential tho...
cheers 
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