OK, I've finally given up on the melody for this track. It is structurally complete, it just needs that melody so I'm opening this up to anyone who wants to try. This has been in my music folder since February and I'd really like to officially release it! Click here:

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=687350&T=4199 and hear the song and read my terms (in the song description).

(you can hear my 'attempt' at a melody in there somewhere but I'm willing to remove it so you can do your thing).

This is by far the best thing I have ever produced (with some help from my good friend, Don Bradbury). But I need some help so I'm throwing it out here. As far as how we'll work it out, sequencer -wise, I have some ideas and we can talk about that later.

Just hear the track and if you want to help, shoot me an email with some samples of your work to: [email protected]

Thanks alot trance addicts!
-Heather

EDIT: Just so you know, I'm not trying to promote myself with this, that's why I didn't put it in the promotion forum. Also, I know there are a lot of people here more talented than me so I'm not all cocky about my music by saying this track is amazing. I just need some help and I hope I got your attention. Peace!

Last edited by 4am on Dec-03-2005 at 00:56

wow i like it a lot...

are you trying to go pro? why not just let all of us tinker with it a bit?

I really enjoy that sound at the beginning of the track. That long reverby sound which sounds as if its being pitched down. How did you make that?

GOOD FREAKIN LORD!!!!...im loving it. female trance producer that uses fruity loops 5....very very nice and fresh indeed. The overall complexity in this track is great. As i can see...and hear...seems as though u were having the melody keep in the chill, uplifting melodic area. Try and listen to other tracks that are in that area and listen to it's melody. Now, don't copy the melody...just use it as a sort of inspiration. Don't worry, you'll come up with something great. If u made the track sound like this already then im sure u can also create a fricken good melody.

Take care and good luck.

Congratulations
This is a very nice song,
5 stars *****
Very nice for a da chill out sessions !!!!!

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wtf women can produce.......... like OMFG


get your tits out

hmmm listen to the song in my sig....if u want i might have a melody.

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personally I think it would need more than just a melody.
Some more sound design would be nice, more sophisticated synth sounds. And the bassline is a tad too grobbly for me. Also a kick with impact would do this track some good, same goes for the snare.

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Thanks, guys! I was pleasantly surprised at the positive comments. Whether it needs a melody or just some cool synth sounds, I need something to call it complete. So if you do want to work on it, I'll open it up to anyone who wants to give it a try. Since I don't want 2 mess with finding someone who has the same vsts as me, could I render it as a weav and you can throw it in the sequencer of your choice and play on top of it?

Peace
-Heather

Hi Heater!
I believe that already i said everything to you, excelent job, i really liked. The only down is the melody.
Top notch track here

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If u made the track sound like this already then im sure u can also create a fricken good melody

I agreee, come on Heater!, I'm sure you can do it
I want hear a full version so back to FL

Good luck!




PS: I did not know that u are a woman

Seems no one knows I'm a woman. Perhaps I should call myself something like 'Super Girl' and then people would stand up and take notice!

I guess the reason I haven't finished the song is I'm on to other things... I get bored with a track after so long.

bah.. for some reason i can't connect to the mp3 stream on the site. any chance u could send the clip to me? i'm in a good mood atm, full of inspiration and VERY bored, so i'd like to give it a shot. PM me for contact details

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