Happy new year TA, here is a track i have finished, i call it electro because i usually produce trance. See what you guys think.

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Last edited by rqpeyruxvg on Jan-08-2006 at 10:44

the clarity in this tunes amazing, how? i try for it all the time but can never get it. you can here every thing, its got a bit of an 80s element to it, is that a lecy guitar in the backround? i cant help but feel it gose on a bit to long at the start thougth, still i cant get over how crisp it is, how do you do it? also i think it needs a pad to fill it up a bit just to give it some feel, part from that its ok.

you did a great work on the production (i think the synth line coming around 2:45 has a too metallic touch to it) but otherwise it's sounding cool, has an old-schoolish feel to it in some parts

this isn't my favorite style but great job !

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A like this tune but I think you could use two quality synths playing in the background to delve us further into the mix!

Bass synth choice seems a bit iffy, though the notes are great. The kick drum is way too processed, slow down on the EQ and Compression and see what happens.

Elements enter rather ???dunno; very bouncey sound you've got going. The hihats need something, they're too few and far between, and loose in the mix, and perhaps slightly over-compressed... it might be your limiter sucking up the dynamic range of the entire mix though.

I'm not sure if this track would be easy or fun to dance to on the floor, but I do like listening at home to the 80s vibe. 4:36, good element introduction. Arp is nice too.

Certain elements sound over-EQed and Compressed.

I like the overall idea and sound. Thanks for sharing.

Last edited by DJ Shibby on Jan-06-2006 at 18:12

Thanx for the replies. im starting to use compression more now and experimenting on alot of elements. This style is out of the blue for me but im liking the feedback.

@hardbeats100: Mastering is a thing you should study a bit in depth to if you struggle to lighten up your music...

More feedback is welcome, thanks for your words.

Nice track. It has indeed a cool retrosound with some nice 80's synth sounds. I only think it is too long now, at 5:00 you basicly start over again and you introduce allmost nothing new after that, i think you had that trance structure in mind . Overall a nice track, nice melodies and a cool 80's vibe to it but a bit too long for my taste.

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This is nice,
cool retro 80's feel and overall the production is very clean

the intro is a bit too long for my liking... :-(
sounds like a score for some 80's action series, I like it

I love the melody of the synth around 3:20 very nice

you did nicely in breaking it down the outro...

good job 9/10

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Thanx Guys, i may work on the intro and long parts tomorrow and repost. Any more suggestions?

not really it's very cool already, just some parts are too long

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I like this track very much and if I heard it in a club it would be one I would get up to dance to. However, the hats sound a little too high end with a bit distortion on them. I really like thestructure and the retro feel to though. great work 8/10.....you would have got 10 if it werent for those hats

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Cheers, dunno what u mean by the hats and distortion tho. Will have a new version up today guys