hello evreybody mavves back , with another sample hahaha.
how ever this is only ideas this is something i do besides Electric Culture at the moment, and this is the non vocal version.
reactions on this piece would be great.

This is mainly the build up before the break, have another version ready to go but it needs some minor adjustments.

http://s37.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...IW11OZS3PTALLU3

*Uppdated vocal version *
http://s44.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...3D37MWS123OPHR1

Uppdate 2 tweak.

http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3FYP5GQ66BK711FNOCLD4DIKXL

Keep em coming.! Cheers // Mavve

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Last edited by mavve on Apr-06-2006 at 01:38

i dont like the bass you start out with, but i do like what it changes into @ 1:13...

the drums @ 0:13 & 0:28 are a little off, i like what youre doing with them tho.

i like the guitar that comes in @ 1:29

percussion and FX are sweet!

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Hey Mavve,

Listened to this new sample of yours. I do not like the basssound in the beginning either. But when u add that big subbas at 0.30 minutes the combination of those basses together is great. Suggestion therefore is let that first bass come up by automating the cutoff in the beginning to let the sound come in less abrupt.

Other than that it is hard to tell anything yet about where you are heading with this sample. Percussion again is great, guitar that you introduce and melody are pretty nice but it is still build up and as you know most important things happen in the breakdown and leadpart of a trancetrack But this really has a nice summerish groove so far.

Cheers mate! Looking forward to finished articles from you.

agree with bass not sounding great, its very housy, then again your kick and percs are housy so i dont no if this is what your intentions were.

like the melody at 1:13 bouncy and happy

was just getting into the track and it stopped

1:13 is great however i think you should work on the build to that more.

cheers

kane

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Hey there.i like it, tho i dont like the bassline in the beginning.
The Subbass is great i like the guitar very much that comes in later on, when you got the whole track ready, just let us know

cheerz

//Alex

First, the track is too loud.
I recognice the first drums, its a loop right?
Dont like the bass in the beggining either.

It's getting better after 1 min tho, i like the feeling there
But to be honest this needs alot of works...

Keep on working with it

//Alexander

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hello tnx for those great replies!
New version upp in 10 min =) how ever I took your toughts in mind while uppgrading this. now its got some beta vocals. and a melody idea , and yes alex its a loop.
this tune was made in all together 2 h, but hey Rome wasent built in one day either. this isnt what i normaly make you will hear it got cheesy =)very cheesy. LOL

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hi again heres the uppdated cheesy version.made some rearangments .still ideas only =)http://s44.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...3D37MWS123OPHR1heheh still needs some twaeking =)

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Last edited by mavve on Apr-04-2006 at 12:24

The beggining is much better now, and the overall sound is good.
Still dont like to hear a drum loop that i recognice

Vocals is good, even though they need some eq'ing i guess.
They sound very high passed.

Melodies are good, fits well with vocals.

You've made it sound so much better since the previous sample, so now i am really curious to hear the finished version

Keep on working

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Wow this is really a sweet track. I'll be listening to the unfinished product many times mind you :P

I have to confess I am absolutely fascinated by the way the kick drum cuts right through the mix. I am not sure if it is because of the loudness of the track but I have been trying to achieve this with compression and a really sharp and fat kick sample. Sounds to me like a loop though and I don't really use loops for kicks and stuff.

Anyways, this track definetly has an energy and I am sure it'd rock a dance floor at this stage even but the vocals would sound nicer if they were fattened up like the mids and lows for them are no where in sight.

The drums and everything are sweet but they kind of get a lil louder near the higher freqs (the pedal hi-hat).

Otherwise, this is a sweet track keep workin on it and I'll be checkin back.

eZ

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Hi guys. ive made a nother version nothing new only tweaked it. and to be honest this ia one of my "learn to produce better " Trax so ive choosen a new aproach to the track, you will hear that the kick is more powerful and doesent have that chill kinda feel to it anymore... more upplifting =) and alex my friend I will take care of that sample of yours at final stage its very temporary at the moment. and the kick isnt any loop most of the perc are made by hand atm.and the kick is my first upplifting (so it sounds on my Phones at least hahaha its 02.00 here =))the old kick hade that effect beacuse it was cuting trough a hat and snare while it was compresed and hade some reverb ... it fits very good when making deep vocal trance =) btw this is the same kick sample will post tweaked version when done =) tnx , I almost forgot the vocals are very hard to fit in the track atm. they were recorded on pc 1dollar mic and so was electric culture you might hear some fuzzy noises its tweaked to the max right now ill record it whit a proper mic and add to the track when done. // Mavve

edit :evry time you listen to it i get happier hahahah

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Last edited by mavve on Apr-05-2006 at 00:31

well here is it what do you guys think does it sound any better?

http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...711FNOCLD4DIKXL

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